Elizabeth Arguello: Assignment

Look at the following email written to solicit information from the website save the whale circle the elements that are inappropriate and note down why they are inappropriate then rewrite the email in a more appropriate style

HI I LIKE YOUR SITE “saves the whales
i’m preparing for a presentation at my school about why whales are in danger of extinction J

i want u to send me some stuff about this like brochures posters etc!!! i need it by tonite !!!
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Hi I like your site “save the whales”
I’m preparing for a presentation at my school about why whales are in danger of extinction. I want you to send me more information about this like brochures posters etc. I need it by tonight.
Could you send me as soon as possible please?